Dark rainy clouds , rain drops gently hitting the window , a misty view of the streets , water running down the roads . It was a great weather . The rain drops hitting the glass looked like it wanted me to open the window .I was worried i would get wet . But i couldn’t hold , i opened it . The rain drops caressing my face , the cold breeze’s scintillating touch , the music i was hearing , all these made it heavenly . I chided myself for not opening it earlier . She made me happy - the rain . I wonder how many had fallen in love with her like i did . But soon she disappeared ,leaving me desperate. She will return soon and give me the delightful experience as she did always .
in the beginning rain is described as a thing and in the later stage personified, i think personification from beginning would be nice!!
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thanks all...ill keep that in mind swami
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ReplyDeletein the beginning rain is described as a thing and in the later stage personified, i think personification from beginning would be nice!!
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